Monday, December 22, 2008
all about me
but in reality I'm not
I don't listen
I yell at my brothers
and I don't know when to stop
In school I act good
but it kills me inside
that I act good because i have to.
Everyone says I need to stop
but I really don't care
I act how I want to
I know it's a habit to act bad
but it doesn't matter
When I said I was a devil
nobody believes me
and that hurts me because
nobody knows how I am
or see me so
they shouldn't know how I am
Friday, December 19, 2008
Still I Rise by Maya Angelou
One of the things that make a good poem is the sound. The things that make sound is rhyme. One example of rhyme in this poem are, "Leaving behind nights of terror and fear i rise, into a daybreak that's wondrously clear i rise." In these two lines the words that rhyme are "fear and clear." Another example of rhyme in this poem is "Bringing the gift that my ancestor gave, I am the dream and the hope of the slave." In these line the words that rhyme are "gave and slave." Another thing that makes a poem sound good is alliteration. An example that i found in this poem is "I am a black ocean leaping and wide welling and swelling." Here in this example the two words that alliteration are "welling and swelling." this counts as alliteration because the repeating sound is the "welling sound." Then, "Why are you baset with gloom? Pumping in my living room. The repeating sound is "oom" Finally, the last example of a sound is repetition. One line that repeats throughout the poem is " I Rise." Then, at the end of some of the stanzas it states "but like dust i rise." although the word after like changes its still repetition.
This poem is good because it gives you something to think about. By this I mean that it has very clear images. One image that you can see is history being made. In the first sentence of the poem it says "You may write me down in history." For me this means that she did something important and she is getting recognized. Next, " Out of the huts of history's shame." The image that is being shown here is that what she did was shameful and wasn't made for history but then rise and overcomes it. Another example of image that this poem has is that it shows a hero. When it says "I am the hope and dream of the slave." This mean that she was there for the slaves and never gave her back to them. Lastly, in the poem "You may kill me with your hatefulness, but still like air I'll rise." This mean that she wasn't going to let anyone get in her way and overcome it and go back and try again. The last image that comes to mind is a person that will never give up. in the first stanza it Say's "You may trod me in the very dirt but still like dust I'll rise" This means that she could be put down and she will still shine. Also in this line" You may shoot me with your words." I like this one because it means that words couldn't get to her and she didn't care.
One more reason that "Still I Rise is a good poem is because it gives you a new perspective. One way that you can get a new perspective is with a simile. one example of a simile is "tides just like hops springing high." this is a simile because it is comparing two things. Then another example is "Shoulders falling like a teardrops" This shows that when you cry the tears falls like your teardrops on your face. Another way that you can get a new perspectives with a personification. "You may cut me with your eyes" is an example because your eyes can cut people. In addition, "You may shoot me with your words." This one is good because you can't shoot people with words you can yell at them but not shoot them. Finally, irony is the last one. One example of irony is taste."with your bitter, twisted lies" here you can taste the dirty lies that someone was saying. Then with irony you can see. "'cause i walk like I've got oil wells." you can see someone walking with oil.
"Still I Rise" by Maya Angelou falls under an excellent poem because of sound, images, and because it gives you a new perspective of something.This poem has good sound because of rhyme, alliteration and repetition. Images because you can see a hero, history, and a person not giving up. New perspective because of simile, personification, and irony. "Still I Rise" made me think very differently because I didn't think that a person was always getting put down by people but she found the fate and always get back up and defend on what she believes in.
Thursday, December 18, 2008
Friends
that you shouldn't play around
Friends will be there for you
when you need them
Friends are a good thing to have
so you have someone to be with
Friends are the ones that will listen to you
and will care about your issues
Friends will be there until the end
and will help you
one of my friends do all these things
and her name is not important.
sonnet
but I wanted a cat
who will aways act funny
and get that bat
I like them because they are sweet
they will sleep on your bed
but they smell like feet
can they turn red?
As i go to the car
and they start to cry
as i look back were far
and i say my last good bye
now I'll get someone new to met
now that's my new pet.
Tuesday, November 25, 2008
mini essay
Monday, November 3, 2008
Animal Farm the last of it!
In animal farm, one of the characters that got the good life was Squealer because he mastered the way to survive. First, one way was the problem with the beds. In one of the seven commandments it stated, “No Animal shall sleep in a bed.” The point was that they were not allowed. Squealer however convinced all the animals that they were allowed but you just couldn’t have any sheets. So the commandment was now” No animal shall sleep in bed with sheets.” Second, there was also the incident with the milk and the apples. The pigs stole the milk and the apples from all the other animals that need it as well. Squealer, with his excellent speaking, was able to convince the other animals to let the pigs have the milk and apples by” Many of us actually dislike milk and apples. We need the milk and apples to stay healthy for you. If we don’t drink the milk, and eat the apples, you don’t want Jones to come back?” Third, there was also the death of Boxer. Squealer told all the animals on the farm that he died peacefully in a hospital. He really got sold to a horse slaughterer. A lesson that was mostly picked up is that if you are like Squealer, then you will survive and you really picked up the game of life. As for Squealer he ended up rich and powerful and also a right hand man for everyone.
Another animal that had a strong connection to the story Animal Farm was Benjamin. He was in the middle of the entire process. When I said in the middle is that they understand but still need to put pieces together. Firstly, during the debate about the windmill or food, he never picked a side to go to. He is just an animal in the sidelines. He didn’t see the need for a windmill at all, but they needed the food as well. “Only old Benjamin refused to pick a side in the debate.” Second he saw the change in the seven commandments. He was the first to notice that something odd was going on in the farm. Since he couldn’t read as well he told Muriel to read them to him and then they finally found the change. However, if they talked out of Napoleon’s rules they will die. Third, Boxer death really hurt everyone. Benjamin said, ”Fools, do you not see what is written on the side of the van.” The van read” Alfred simmonds, horse slaughterer and glue boiler, willingdon” A lesson that was picked up for people like Benjamin in that you should be the way you are. You just need to be faster in figuring out what is really about to happen. As for Benjamin, he survived the game.
The last animal is boxer. He believes everything he hears and that is a problem. First when boxer believes every story he hears. One example is when he said, “ Napoleon is always right.” This is a lie, because Napoleon always lies every animal on the farm. Second, one story he believes is with the windmill. He believed that he had to work harder on the windmill to get it completed. He asked the cockerel to wake him three-quarters of an hour earlier instead of half in hour. While he was hurt, he kept on working on the windmill. Finally, he believed the story of his death. Before he died they told him that he was going to die peacefully in the hospital. Another lie that boxer believed. In reality he was sold to a Horse Slaughterer. Boxer should have learned a lesson to not to believe everything you hear because it is mostly all lies. In the end, Boxer got his tragic fate.
Monday, October 27, 2008
Animal Farm Essay!
In animal farm, one of the characters that got the good life was Squealer because he mastered the way to survive. First, one way was the problem with the beds. In one of the seven commandments it stated, “No Animal shall sleep in a bed.” The point was that they were not allowed. Squealer however convinced all the animals that they were allowed but you just couldn’t have any sheets. So the commandment was now” No animal shall sleep in bed with sheets.” Second, there was also the incident with the milk and the apples. The pigs stole the milk and the apples from all the other animals that need it as well. Squealer, with his excellent speaking, was able to convince the other animals to let the pigs have the milk and apples by” Many of us actually dislike milk and apples. We need the milk and apples to stay healthy for you. If we don’t drink the milk, and eat the apples, you don’t want Jones to come back?” Third, there was also the death of Boxer. Squealer told all the animals on the farm that he died peacefully in a hospital. He really got sold to a horse slaughterer. A lesson that was mostly picked up is that if you are like Squealer, then you will survive and you really picked up the game of life. As for Squealer he ended up rich and powerful and also a right hand man for everyone.
Another animal that had a strong connection to the story Animal Farm was Benjamin. He was in the middle of the entire process. When I said in the middle is that they understand but still need to put pieces together. Firstly, during the debate about the windmill or food, he never picked a side to go to. He is just an animal in the sidelines. He didn’t see the need for a windmill at all, but they needed the food as well. “Only old Benjamin refused to pick a side in the debate.” Second he saw the change in the seven commandments. He was the first to notice that something odd was going on in the farm. Since he couldn’t read as well he told Muriel to read them to him and then they finally found the change. However, if they talked out of Napoleon’s rules they will die. Third, Boxer death really hurt everyone. Benjamin said, ”Fools, do you not see what is written on the side of the van.” The van read” Alfred simmonds, horse slaughterer and glue boiler, willingdon” A lesson that was picked up for people like Benjamin in that you should be the way you are. You just need to be faster in figuring out what is really about to happen. As for Benjamin, he survived the game.
The last animal is Boxer. You do not want to be like boxer at all because for many reasons. First, to defend my reasoning he was a hard worker. He was the one that pulled the farm together and got the work done.” I will work harder” will always get him motivated to do something. During on of the battles on the farm Boxer got hurt. Since he is a loyal animal, he decided not to tell anyone and keep working. Until one day when he couldn’t stand the pain he told clover the truth. Another statement is he will always put the farm first instead of himself in most cases. As the windmill fell down for the second time around he never lost hope neither did clover so they didn’t mind repairing it yet again. In some days that there was a lot of work to do on the farm he will usually wake up earlier than the rest of the animals. That is a sign of loyalty and he takes pride in his work. Lastly, not everybody is good like Boxer. He was sold to a horse slaughterer. I think that they didn’t have a good enough reason to do that to a very good worker and he was always there for them through good and bad times. During the story a lesson that I thought that was important in back in the days was that good people would die because they were unable to understand what was going on and maybe they never will. As for Boxer, he ended up the worst of all the animals because he died a very horrible death.